I've been away for some time, and I'd like to start posting again. I decided on redrawing one of my favorite old illustrations, with a focus on giving the central figure a more coherent and intentioned character design, as opposed to the messy experimental style of the original. There are some things that I still prefer about the original, and many that I don't. I feel like I put a distracting amount of definition in the hair of the new version, but I'd like to hear which you prefer, and why. Either way, I appreciate you all for taking the time to view or read this, and if any of you could tell me how you put paragraphs or linebreaks into a description on this website, I'd appreciate you even more.